Sample report

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Mia is invented, and so is everything below. It is here so you can see exactly what a Lumora report contains before you upload anything of your own. Year 12, Rockingham. Casual retail job. Applying for a school-based business traineeship.

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Analysis completeRecruiter verdict · 61/100

Your experience is stronger than your resume currently shows.

3 priority improvements found. One at a time, in order of impact.

Lumora found 3 issues affecting your resume. Everything below is yours free, including the wording you can copy straight out. Get the corrected resume, a tailored cover letter and the full application pack. That part is a one-off from A$19.

Say what you are going for in the first lineTurn your duties into things that happenedPut your certificate and your leadership role on the page

1.Say what you are going for in the first line

High impact

An employer reading a stack of applications decides in a few seconds whether yours is for the role in front of them.

Before

Responsible for customer service and handling the register.

After

Served 120+ customers a shift on the front register, resolved refund and stock queries at the counter, and balanced the till at close.

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How the score breaks down

  • Clarity and readability72/100

    Easy to read. The structure is sound.

  • Evidence and outcomes44/100

    Duties are listed. What changed because of you is not.

  • Role targeting55/100

    Nothing on the page names the traineeship you are going for.

  • ATS and formatting78/100

    Parses cleanly. No columns, no text in images.

  • Completeness58/100

    Missing a short skills line and your first aid certificate.

What Lumora did not do

  • It did not invent a job, a date, a certificate or a number.
  • Every rewritten line above comes from something already on the sample resume. The scale in the rewritten bullets is the sort of detail the person would know and can confirm.
  • It did not promise an interview, and it cannot.

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