1.Say what you are going for in the first line
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Sample report
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Mia is invented, and so is everything below. It is here so you can see exactly what a Lumora report contains before you upload anything of your own. Year 12, Rockingham. Casual retail job. Applying for a school-based business traineeship.
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Resume score · 61/100
This scores the document: how clearly it reads, whether your claims carry evidence, whether software can parse it, and whether the sections an employer expects are there. It is not a prediction about who will call you.
Your experience is stronger than your resume currently shows.
3 priority improvements found. One at a time, in order of impact.
Lumora found 3 issues affecting your resume. Everything below is yours free, including the wording you can copy straight out. Get the corrected resume, a tailored cover letter and the full application pack. That part is a one-off from A$9.99.
Say what you are going for in the first lineTurn your duties into things that happenedPut your certificate and your leadership role on the page
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How the score breaks down
- Clarity and readability72/100
Easy to read. The structure is sound.
- Evidence and outcomes44/100
Duties are listed. What changed because of you is not.
- Role targeting55/100
Nothing on the page names the traineeship you are going for.
- ATS and formatting78/100
Parses cleanly. No columns, no text in images.
- Completeness58/100
Missing a short skills line and your first aid certificate.
What Lumora did not do
- It did not invent a job, a date, a certificate or a number.
- Every rewritten line above comes from something already on the sample resume. The scale in the rewritten bullets is the sort of detail the person would know and can confirm.
- It did not promise an interview, and it cannot.
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